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- Interviews with his mum are too long, need to be shorter as audience will get bored.
- Needs more cutaways to fill the interviews as there is too much of Luke - Also need to be relevant to what is being spoke about.
- Could do with montages of him playing football, with a soundtrack behind it, to break up the interviews.
- Images of his dad would be useful, show the audience who it is he is talking about/looking up too.
- Runs really smoothly.
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